Hey guys, sorry it took me so long to comment on these. It't definitely heading in the right direction, but you're still not driving the point home about the interaction between the sun's energy, and the solar cells. The boards really need to reflect that relationship. it is crucial to the entire story.
You're also going to need voice over to go along with this. That will help the viewers understand your mesage. So please don't forget the script for wednesday. start watching insurance and energy company commercials to get the pacing right.
this is not just about making pretty pictures. I know you guys will kick ass at that. this is MUCH more about communication.
With that in mind, you need to hit 30 second EXACTLY. one of the reasons you're timing up short is that you're missing part of your story with the interaction.
Lookin' good
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ReplyDeleteHey guys, sorry it took me so long to comment on these. It't definitely heading in the right direction, but you're still not driving the point home about the interaction between the sun's energy, and the solar cells. The boards really need to reflect that relationship. it is crucial to the entire story.
ReplyDeleteYou're also going to need voice over to go along with this. That will help the viewers understand your mesage. So please don't forget the script for wednesday. start watching insurance and energy company commercials to get the pacing right.
this is not just about making pretty pictures. I know you guys will kick ass at that. this is MUCH more about communication.
With that in mind, you need to hit 30 second EXACTLY. one of the reasons you're timing up short is that you're missing part of your story with the interaction.